This is a beautiful, heart-wrenching poem. Your words are well chosen and rhythmic, and have the power to inspire great emotion within the reader. You are a true poet when your words can do that. I hope you get published one day!

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This is so much better than my i am from poem. Mine was lamity lame lame, but this is true writing and feeling the truth of yourself. I mean, i got a B- on mine! Yours is amazing, favorited immediately-thanks for the great poem.

Sorry that im waaaay too tired and lazy to log in. Penname up there if you feel the need to reply.

This is so much better than my i am from poem. Mine was lamity lame lame, but this is true writing and feeling the truth of yourself. I mean, i got a B- on mine! Yours is amazing, favorited immediately-thanks for the great poem.

This is simply beautiful- and somehow I feel I have gained a picture from you, of yourself. Misti xx

I rather like this - it's like a lifestory written in not so many words. Really nice descriptions, and you finished it well :)