Interesting...chapter 4?

Again, there are some writing mistakes that threw me off, but it feels real...that's what I like about this story. You, somehow, make it feel real. Keep doing that, and I'll keep reading. Update soon

Just a little more detail would be nice, but other than that it's really good...And it feels real

Are you going to continue this as a story (I hope you do)

You might wana check the formatting of the story, it's a tad bit cluttered without paragraph indents or double spaces between paragraph. Other than that I would love to add this to my Community "Those Subjects no one Talks About" which is about things people don't really talk about, such as prostitution.