awww! So cute! Love it!

dis stry is fucking good i truely love dat guy :)

Aww! that was just the sweetest story ever! One of my friends once told me that true love never knocks your door, it completely knocks you out completely, Off your feet, makes you take strange decisions that eventually makes your life!

I read the whole thing but during the middle I was contemplating to stop. There's just something missing from it. I don't know if its because it doesn't seem realistic enough for me or because there isn't any/enough emotion portrayed through it. There doesn't seem to be sufficient tension or conflict to make moments memorable or real. I know these are all terrible things to say, but all reviews help even if they're the 'omg I love this' reviews.

this was SO cute! great job:D

I liked this it was so ... Idk maybe awesome is the word :) but I like Jolene she's funni to me but cool story bro •3. - Mainly

Loved it. Hope to read more from you. Keep up the good work :)

Nicole

Noooo! It can't finish yet!

Although, I did like how it finished. :P Really well written - needed a bit more drama, I think. The climax of the story ended too soon.

One thing that I was curious about was how she had gotten that cut on her arm...? She didn't seem like the clumsy or emo type...haha.

Really well written - don't know the song, but I'm sure you followed it well. (:

SnoQueen