|Reviews for Seventeen Winters|
| RandomUser674 9/1/11 . chapter 1
This one flows nicely. I smiled when I read "colour." (Like all American teenaged girls, I love the European way of spelling, or anything remotely foreign. Especially accents, because our accents suck. We're weird like that. Yeah.)
Check these lines:
Another winter has come and past (you mean "passed")
T'was so much(colder than the last (random parenthesis)
| Psychedelic Dreams 9/1/11 . chapter 1
Really liked the description about the four seasons. Started from winter only to come one full round back to it again. Even though it lasts for months, I get this sense that seasons are fleeting and gently slip through your fingers before you realise it. Nice.