You should so write more on this one ')

THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY

update soon please :D

WoW! Again, I'm completely astonished! Keep up with the good work! And girlie, you need to tell me when you put this up because I get so excited when I see it and I just can't help but read it! More, More! I commands it! More! *rabid animal face*

Wow... This was so sad! But, I'm really feeling her pain now! Please continue, and as always, I'll be here ready and reviewing! -

update soon please

Wow, you are such a deep writer! I hope you put up the next chapter soon! Go, Go, Go! XD

Wow, Ornetta lives such a painful existence! I felt her pain, seeming as if forgotten by the one other person she thought she could ever trust. :( You took my advice, though! (I think) Your sentences are a bit longer now, and I think that's amazing! Keep doing a great job! I want to know what happens next, but the chapter should be longer! I love long chaps, and I'd love to know more about Ornetta, of course! Update soon, girlie!

nice chapter :P

Wow! I did not expect that! Now you got me begging for more, girl! I hope she meets that boy again! I was in awe at the second chapter!OO Keep going! XD

I don't think you can die from one cut on the wrist...just sayin

Hey, I really like your story. It portrays a lot of emotion, though you emphasize too much on single words. I'd suggest making the sentences longer, but I like the way you write. I'm off to the next chapter! Oh, and if you can do me a favor, can you check out my story? It'd be awesome if we can keep trading reviews. :D It's called Perspective.

Woah. That was really good! Please update ASAP!

update soon :D really good