This is a charming and imaginative piece- who would have thought of a snow man's point of view! It's sad too- poor ice man- imobile.

I love the Scottishness of this. The vocabulary is so much more interesting than the words I'm used to. Is there any reason you bold all your poems?

This was quite interesting. I initially had the idea that the female was his wife. But as I read on, I realised that she was more likely to be his grandchild. Still stuck between deciding that the image of the girl was just a hallucination or reality. But I guess it's up to the reader to decide. Slightly lonely feel to this poem but it adds to its charm. Not bad.