|Reviews for The Break of Day|
| Anehalia 7/9/12 . chapter 20
I'm still here and reading. Keiran is adorable.
| Anehalia 6/19/12 . chapter 19
I forgot there even was a part two. :)Also, I noticed details on character looks/actions are getting weak...
| Anehalia 3/11/12 . chapter 17
I love how vibrant your characters are! I love reading your stuff because of your awesome characters! (just putting that out there if I haven't said so yet)
| Anehalia 2/2/12 . chapter 14
Sometimes things do seem to get a little slow, but I like it all all the same. Kieran and Azriel are such opposites and such awesome characters that I can't help but like your story.
| Anehalia 1/23/12 . chapter 13
I wanted to let you know I am still reading and enjoying this story. I love Kieran!
| Anehalia 12/11/11 . chapter 9
Its readable. If you need any help with the html editing, I can try and help you. I know some html :)
I so wanted to see what Kieran and the uncles planned for January first. I was slightly disappointed by not getting to see whatever embarrassing thing they planned, but I enjoyed the second part. I don't think I can help loving Kieran. He is just so lovable and puppy like.
| Anehalia 10/21/11 . chapter 7
I like this Yule fair. They re all so cute and chipper.
| Anehalia 10/17/11 . chapter 6
Of course you've kept things interesting. I don't think your stories lack for interesting. I like the addition of Kieran also having a forest spirit when he isn't supposed to. How did he come by his owl?
| Anehalia 10/13/11 . chapter 5
I like Manah. Poor Azriel. He really can't stand against a force of nature like Kieran. Is this what Ione needs to learn to become powerful?
| Anehalia 9/24/11 . chapter 4
I love your writing. :) The story does feel rushed out points (some of the scenes could use more detail when you go back and do a rewrite. I found on mistake, but I can't remember it. I think it was at the beginning of chapter 3.