Actually hell is hell. I don't see how it can get any worse. If you hit someone with a car call the ambulance then get the hell out of there. Unless your a doctor of course.

My favorite line? "There's a special place in hell just for you". I agree, never do that, makes you evil. Great story, amazing idea, descriptive content, overall, awesome :)

This little one-shot is rather inspirational. Is that what you were going for? The boy who stayed, though, did he just stay because of his past experience with his little brother? Or would he have stayed regardless?

A lot of people don't want to own up to the fact that they hit someone- especially a child- and they try to run away from their responsibilities.

This is well written, and I didn't find a single spelling error.

Way to go, writing about a hard topic beautifully. :)