|Reviews for Puppet on a string|
| lamourlibre 8/30/11 . chapter 1
This is fantastic work.
The last line came as a surprise to me, so it really added to the emotional power of the poem.
"You can choke me around my neck / With my own strings and I wouldn't mind."
Those lines yield so much power. Good work! Keep writing, and I can only wish that you'll always have the power to cut the strings when anyone tries to control you.