|Reviews for Rules of the Pack|
| Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 6
No, It can't stop here!
| Guest 1/21/13 . chapter 6
| ShinigamiForHire 12/21/12 . chapter 6
Please, continue 3
| Kat O' Donovan 6/7/12 . chapter 6
aww please update?
| Sayure 5/17/12 . chapter 6
I like were story but the're not many of them, not all are good. This one I couldn't but save in my favorites, thanks for it, it's all I like from the possessive alfa to the sub but not that submissive pup. Please don't stop writing.
| lovesyoumore 5/13/12 . chapter 6
Great story! upload soon.
| Midnights Scream 5/1/12 . chapter 6
As always very interesting. glad to see you've update. Poor Brad. I hope he takes the whole having sex with his alpha thing well. Being raped and then that isn't really the best combination. He seemed to do well with the other stuff though and I doubt ray will purposely hurt him. great job!
| Invalid 5/1/12 . chapter 6
Woot! Another chapter. I wish they were longer, you always leave me hanging on for more. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Only suggestion would be to give it a second read over in a few days (after some times has passed since you wrote it) so you can catch some of the minor errors. You make a lot of the same ones i do, randomly replacing words with a similar one when you're just rushing through t all to get it all out and written down. Self editing is hard since when you reread it you read right over a good half of the mistakes because you already know what it -should- say. But yeah, that's small stuff. Loving the story.
| tatertotts 1/2/12 . chapter 5
I was hoping this would be updated when I found my way back to fictionpress haha. Love where it's going and...that last seen was really hot lol. I love werewolf stories and yours is like the only good one I've found on here. So keep up the good work and please please please please don't abandon the story. I will cry. A lot.
P.S. You might wanna double check your spelling. For example, instead of ya or yes you write yer. Also some sentences are a bit jumbled up. Good luck
| moon01234 12/11/11 . chapter 5
Looking good. Can't wait to read more soon.
Only advice, arrange the presentation on this chapter. A whole chunk of block to read is physically un-appealing to the reader and difficult as well.
Otherwise, great job.
| fuyublue 11/22/11 . chapter 5
| jessicas favorite stories 11/22/11 . chapter 5
| anonymous 11/22/11 . chapter 5
Please conmtinue this story! It is really interesting, and I just love stories where someone has been hurt in some way and someone comes to help them heal...*sigh* I wish someone did that for me...
| Adele 11/1/11 . chapter 4
I'm not sure if you are still going on with this story, but i hope you will. 'Cause seriously, i love t, it's really. Your writting is pretty good and the storyline is interesting.
| fuyublue 10/15/11 . chapter 4