Very cute story, would totally love to hear more about them. Would also like to hear where Jack goes from there.

Sad but cute:) I'd love to see the whole story to this one

Aww, this is a cute story!

Cathrin Satoru

So... first I'd like to say that when I got this alert, I didn't actually see the phrase 'New Story.' All I saw was Dirty Animal Sex. And I was like WTF? Why am I getting this kind of message? I didn't sign up for this! Well, evidently I did when I put you guys on Author Alert. XD

Now for the real review... It was good, I liked it. (as always; I feel like a broken record, cause that's all I ever seem to say to you two).

I think the only think I could ask of you guys is to have some straight characters (I'm not even talking main characters; I'm talking backdrop characters like Emily). It would make the story more believable, I think. :)

That's all really. Good job. I'll be here, waiting for the next one and hoping that I don't freak out like I did about this one...

Kiyoshi'sGirl64 and Kiyoshi