-flails- OH MY GOD. Way to end on a cliffhanger, yeesh! :P Suspense aside, I really loved this one. The way you give the character's backstory a little bit at a time is awesome and, of course, I'm absolutely hooked. :D

Aww, poor Naomi. :( She's all on her own and Joseph's out of it for a while... Insanely convoluted and heartpounding as always - loved it! :D

Aw, poor Naomi. :( At least she has Joey to be all badass and save her. :P Awesome as usual - the twists! Dear god, the TWISTS! XD Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I love Kyrie so much. XD "Um…last time I went on the field with you, I got kidnapped. And then I got kidnapped again." Beautiful. XD

So Naomi's running through the forest, Jane's deteriorating, Kyrie's snarking it up as usual, Frederic's in turmoil, and little soldier boy is going to wake up extremely confused. XD

DUN DUN! Holy crap, that's intense. XD I love the emotional conflict, as always. Really well done. :D