|Reviews for Restart|
| TheBloodEdge 4/7/12 . chapter 36
Yes! Finally more on this Arcane guy! So... He can build androids? What about Gundams? Uh... Leth has an iPhone 4S? And he doesn't know his own number? I smell plot point...
| TheBloodEdge 3/27/12 . chapter 35
I have a theory on Leth. He's really the final and strongest Infernal, staying alive all this time by acting as comic relief. His status enables him to get blasted to the sun and come back laughing about it. His sin is... Perversion or Lust. Or Troll. He manages to stick with Sol without anyone knowing him as an Infernal because he has the ability akin to Aizen zanpaku-to. Except he can hypnotize anyone regardless of whether or not they've seen or known him. He's playing buddy-buddy with Sol to get the Light for some wish that goes beyond human understanding.
Ridiculous banter aside, I wonder what's Secille's relationship to Perel?
| TheBloodEdge 3/24/12 . chapter 34
Heh. Secille is a teacher from hell. Bet she's an Infernal.
| TheBloodEdge 3/24/12 . chapter 33
Sol? Cera? Reiko? Avy? Some new sadistic but hot teacher? Makoto! Aoi! Leth! IN ONE CLASS! This. Is. Win.
| Kisho 3/18/12 . chapter 33
Nihaha, yaay, managed to catch up just in time, nya xD
Cool couple of chapters, anyway, nya x3 The fight with Hue was really cool, nya, although it didn't have much of a sense of action in the execution, nya... ah, well I think the action scenes are still kind of the weakness in your writing, nyan, although you are getting better x3
Still, it's really cool watching where this is going, nya Is it gonna end soon, nya? I wonder Now that Sol's beaten an Infernal in one on one combat, nya, it feels like it's entering a final stretch, nya... I'll read excitedly to find out, nya o3o
| VJ-san 3/17/12 . chapter 13
You update so freaking fast! It's hard for me to keep up! But anyways on to my comments. The pacing has really improved and I like the teaching of the spells. I think you did good with explaning what they are and describing what they look like. Okay, now I try to finish.
| TheBloodEdge 3/11/12 . chapter 32
That was epic shit! So was Hue really drunk? Also, what does the Light actually do? Sol should really hang around Makoto and Aoi more to learn the tricks of the trade to survive and win.
| VJ-san 3/10/12 . chapter 7
Hey, since it's taking me a while to read this story I'll just post a review about what I've read so far.
Number one, I really like your characters. I find them believable and I think that's a good thing for a story to have. I can also see that you fixed the pacing by the sixth and seventh chapter which is good. This is also a very interesting story; I'm hooked and I can't wait to finish reading the story and to find out how Sol's power works and what he's going to do with it. I also want to see what happens between Sol and Cera (love maybe XD). One thing I have to say is that I think you should italicize people's thoughts. I just think that would be easier for the reader to pick up on thoughts without you having to put "s/he thought" at the end of the sentence. All in all great job and I totally can't wait to finish the story!
You're friendly reviewer, VJ-san.
| TheBloodEdge 3/9/12 . chapter 31
Yes Makoto. You were epic.
Hue? Drunk? It would have happened someday.
| Blood-Lion 3/9/12 . chapter 31
I was wondering when this would happen. Seriously. I half expected Hue to go off and get drunk at some point, and to get into a fight when it happened. Never expected it to be such a big fight, though. Nice.
| Blood-Lion 3/9/12 . chapter 30
Woohoo, I finished it! So far, that is.
Not bad at all. Your writing improved with each chapter, which was good to see, and the characters are all distinct yet with their own senses of humor. Cera, Perel, and Reiko are my favorites (huh, all girls...) mostly because they're cute in their own ways. However I like Ryan and Blade as well.
I almost forgot that this was part gag, though, and was truly concerned at how difficult it was to take Blade seriously at times. I suppose the only real complaint to give is the excessive swearing. In one chapter (can't remember the number, maybe around 21) everyone got into an argument about Sol and Avy, and the cursing was over the top. I get when it's there SOMETIMES, but that was too much in my opinion.
Also, you're typically lacking in environmental description. It's enough to paint the general picture, but still.
Other than that, good plot and interesting characters. I look forward to reading more even after the week is up
| TheBloodEdge 3/9/12 . chapter 30
Ryan. Even when he doesn't mean to... He can still troll.
So! Special Attack huh! I think it'll be named Mugen Punch or Sol Gravion Nova. Or Shining Finger or Breast Fire or Goldion Crusher or Giga Drill Breaker.
Or Flower Power.
| TheBloodEdge 3/9/12 . chapter 29
Aoi and Makoto are quickly rising through the ranks of my favorite character list thanks to this chapter. I hope to see more of them. I don't know why, I love your side characters more than your main characters.
Let's recall. So far, three characters have shown the ability to break the 4th wall. The thug, Aoi and Makoto. Hmm... Maybe they're more powerful than they think they are.
| TheBloodEdge 3/9/12 . chapter 28
If you heard a loud "YEAAAAAAAAAAAH!" from a distance... That was me.
Yeaaaaaaah! Leth is finally back! After 28 chapters! He's perversity has been amplified so much! I love it! Maybe he'll blow up those loaves of bread! I do love the way he 'bumps' into cute girls. Heheh, maybe he should meet the other female characters. All hell will break loose... On him! Of course, I'm not going to ship him with Cera, she belongs with Sol.
Speaking of Cera, how did Ryan make her buy the groceries?
| TheBloodEdge 3/9/12 . chapter 27
Oh. I thought Hue and Blade were gonna have an epic battle. Can't predict everything huh?
Imagine if Ryan were a school counselor...