Nice chapter. The ebding of it was fun and interesting

A chapter which showed a lot about what the main characters are thinking about. Btw I think that master Ash is up to something. The way he talked, knew things,hid them and didn't ask anything made me really suspicious of him.

:o what happens? I must know, I will not rest properly until I do!

I HAVE NO WORDS! I am utterly speechless! this was the best chapter by far! my favorite! loved the ending phrase "my lips met her skin." boom. done. well for now.

This was absolutely amazing and congrats on a 10,000 word chapter!

please update soon!

Awesome chapter! I loved it! It shows a whole different side of our demon even if he tries to hide it under a layer of arrogance and uncaring .

okay, LOVED it!

Silver leaving really didn't surprise me to be honest, and Ryume's sleepwear shirt had me in hysterics! That was just perfect! I cannot wait for the next chapter to see where Reuben took her and such. Love your writing, keep it up!

This chapter was pretty surprising. I like Reuben and his cool powers but I just can't understand what is in his head... Like what is he thinking now trying to take the girl with him? .'

Oh my! ok, i can completely understand why Ryume started cracking up at Reuben's pizza comment! I totally would have cracked up myself! and what is with this cliff hanger! gosh! is she finally being kidnapped? wait, by Reuben? or someone else? I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter! loved it!

Well this chapter was pretty funny. That question ,,Can I keep the pizza?" This question made me laugh so hard. Reuben is just the best :D Anyway I'm really confused as to what happened t night. The creatures description matches Reuben's but what would he be doing there?

I enjoyed this story a lot. It's quite funny and the main characters have interesting personalities. My favourite is Reuben. He's just awesome .

Okay, you have no idea how much you just made my day! you posted! :D

well this is going to be short because I need to get to sleep, but I loved how you described the bullets popping out of the wounds! man, I wish mine did that!

And what's all this about his curse from Satan? Update soon!

absolutely love your story! your writing flows so nicely, so naturally, its just great. One of my favorite characters so far is Reuben (did i spell that right? i hope so!) I dont know if it's just bc i like the bad boys (hey who doesnt) but he has a deep personality that is very interesting to read, same with Ryume, she seems just so sweet- oh god im rambling! Over all love it! Please update asap!