So because you can't reply to your own review. I figured I'd just do it this way. About a year ago, the way I wrote my review could be taken very badly. I just wanted to clarify that I do not think that people who are not white skinned aren't human. Every person, no matter their ancestry, skin color, religion, and so forth is a human.
I would also like to say: Keep writing. :D

Love, Love, LOVE! 3 please post more!

This is such a good story.

why is Leanne always the damsel in distress?

Great story! But there is just one thing that bugs me and I will probably be the only one. Idaho was inducted into the union in 1890 so you should be calling it the Idaho Territory. Just a small detail that you may or may not feel the need to correct.

So Mustang Eyes is a half-blood? Interesting...

I could edit a lil if you want me to give it a hand, and I'm fairly good in History (some parts of it this one being one of them) and yeah...
One more thing. WRITE MORE YOU CLIFFIE! I NEED MORE!

Uh oh. This is bad. Very bad.

NO! Mustang Eyes! Le! NO!

Aww, well, at least she got a puppy, and isn't dead!

EMMA! I pity anyone who didn't have the next chapter up right away. You're such a cliffhanger!

Oh no...this is awful. I mean, no, this is good, the story is good, the writing is good, but what's happening is awful.

NO! STOP STOP STOP! HALT! DON'T KILL HER! *cough cough* I'll just read the next chapter now...

BRENT I KILL YOU TONIGHT! Mustang Eyes...could you maybe listen to the whole story?

Evil man. Me huwts de evil man.