Poor Leanne I want to cry with her :S I hope she gets in time to the camp an explain everything to Mustang Eyes!

Thanks for the update it was really good it's so sweet how Mustang Eyes keeps saving her. I think I have a crush on him ;D

No if I was Leanne I would have stayed with Mustang Eyes :S I hope they someway stay together. I love your story, I can't wait until you update good job. :D

aww Mustang Eyes may feel something for her I think Ohanzee also feels something, I think?

Poor Leanne I bet that hurts.

I so wanted a kiss but I guess it will come I hope! :O

Yay More Mustang Eyes! But still poor Leanne, Yuma sure doesn't like her but at least Mustang Eyes will defend her. :)

How can her father be so cruel and married her off. Poor Leanne :S

awww that's sweet that Jason has feelings for her, but I like Mustang Eyes better even if he hasn't come out that much.

I like the way you started the story with your prologue.

Your story looks interesting :D

I love it! Reminds me of an old Western novel I read a while ago :)

It's really good for a first chapter, you set up the plot/situation nicely. Nope, didn't catch any spelling/grammar mistakes, if there are some then it's not distracting from the story which is good!

Haha, what drives me crazy is when these people on here spell a commonly used word wrong and they do it over and over again throughout the whole story! Ever notice that? :D

I love your hook, you picked the perfect segment to be your Prologue/opener. Is this based off The Phantom Stallion? I've actually never read those books, but they must be good since you seem to like them a lot of FanFiction :)

love it plz ud soon XD

As always, I'm left wanting more :)