|Reviews for Mustang Eyes The Original Novel|
| Foohypink 9/8/11 . chapter 14
Poor Leanne I want to cry with her :S I hope she gets in time to the camp an explain everything to Mustang Eyes!
| Foohypink 9/8/11 . chapter 12
Thanks for the update it was really good it's so sweet how Mustang Eyes keeps saving her. I think I have a crush on him ;D
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 11
No if I was Leanne I would have stayed with Mustang Eyes :S I hope they someway stay together. I love your story, I can't wait until you update good job. :D
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 10
aww Mustang Eyes may feel something for her I think Ohanzee also feels something, I think?
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 9
Poor Leanne I bet that hurts.
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 8
I so wanted a kiss but I guess it will come I hope! :O
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 6
Yay More Mustang Eyes! But still poor Leanne, Yuma sure doesn't like her but at least Mustang Eyes will defend her. :)
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 5
How can her father be so cruel and married her off. Poor Leanne :S
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 4
awww that's sweet that Jason has feelings for her, but I like Mustang Eyes better even if he hasn't come out that much.
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 2
I like the way you started the story with your prologue.
| Foohypink 9/7/11 . chapter 1
Your story looks interesting :D
| Tessa Ricci 9/7/11 . chapter 2
I love it! Reminds me of an old Western novel I read a while ago :)
It's really good for a first chapter, you set up the plot/situation nicely. Nope, didn't catch any spelling/grammar mistakes, if there are some then it's not distracting from the story which is good!
Haha, what drives me crazy is when these people on here spell a commonly used word wrong and they do it over and over again throughout the whole story! Ever notice that? :D
| Tessa Ricci 9/5/11 . chapter 1
I love your hook, you picked the perfect segment to be your Prologue/opener. Is this based off The Phantom Stallion? I've actually never read those books, but they must be good since you seem to like them a lot of FanFiction :)
| Vampireacademyrox 9/5/11 . chapter 4
love it plz ud soon XD
| TheWriterInDisguise 9/1/11 . chapter 1
As always, I'm left wanting more :)