It's amazing (: the last part made my stomach flip...but it's so Clingy and dark. The sickness part reminds me of it being a desperate goodbye

I love this

Ahhhhh!

You write so deeply all the time

I hope you how captivating each poem is

I love it :D

The comparisons are deeeeeepppppp

(: i like how the stomach part reminds me of biology from last year

The digestive track lolz

:) awesome poem...I'm going to re-read it for fun now

U know like people do to books they :3

:D

ohhhhhhh the irony of this! it really puts a twist on this and makes it deeper

it's like saying I guess that you fall in love with the right people but your the wrong person...that's so deep

like It just is

ohhhhhh the irony again

greet job :)

I don't know what a smokestack is...so I don't know if a nine year old is supposed to do that

But it had that darkness to it -like he was addicted to it and needed it for surival or something

Greet job :)

uhhhhh

it reminded me of a calculator at first...I'm kinda out of it

but terrific poem...It has that haunting feeling

but its extremely deep as well

Clever poems though-i'm obsessed!

aweeeeeeeeeeeeee

sweat poem :D

it's the memories that really choke people up sometimes XD

is how u'r supposed to feel when u get sick!like the perspective of it:)

haha very interesting and comedic perspective for a poem

i was cracking up by the first line!

this poem is absolutely amazing! and yeah I've noticed as i get older I see things differently

the spacing of each word really adds to the vibe! greet job XD