|Reviews for Chapters In Our Lives|
| Anonymity'sProtege 1/12/12 . chapter 1
This poem is so true.
| Meadow Frost 12/16/11 . chapter 1
It's really nice. It gave me an idea... don't worry, I'm not going to rip off of you. It'll be rather different...
| DougieM 11/20/11 . chapter 1
This is great, a little different I haven't heard scars talked about that way before, some great stuff here.
| this-is-silence 10/27/11 . chapter 1
Very deep and thoughtful. I like your depiction of scars...how they're stories to be proud of rather than something to be ashamed of.
My favorite lines:
"And our smiles are still bright as then"-it almost gives me a sense of nostalgia:)
"The wind ripples the lake and turns the page"-as a conclusion, this really emphasizes the theme of the poem. I feel the page turning, almost literally.
| DolceDesiderio 10/15/11 . chapter 1
Oooohhh, I really liked this ! Great job !
| To-Be-Remembered 10/14/11 . chapter 1
I had to read it twice just to take it all in, it's surprisingly deep, with a truth to it. A really nice free-verse, I like it!
| BuddingPoet 10/14/11 . chapter 1
omg i LOVE this! its so true! and deep. i have to show this to people!
| non.graceful 10/12/11 . chapter 1
I could imagine a photograph of a group- you enabled me to have that vision :)
- you seen to always use the word 'scarred' in your poems -.-
| R. Ficst 10/11/11 . chapter 1
thank you for pointing this one to my attention.
beautiful. I like your interpretation of scars; events both good and bad, of grand proportions and little consequence, mark us, and make us who we are. These marks are to be cherished, for they "tell the stories of us, who we are." Beautiful poem.
| Ivy Devi 10/10/11 . chapter 1
WOW! Thats amazing! I love it!
"The wind ripples the lake and turns the page,
In the chapters of our lives." the end is my favorite part of it!
| Almostafreebird 10/8/11 . chapter 1
| Hania 10/5/11 . chapter 1
The wording of this one was interesting. It struck me as very positive! You're quite good at poetry )
| Star Wars Obsessed 10/5/11 . chapter 1
Wow! That was REALLY good! You have such a good imagination! I think this is my favorite one, too! Loved it! XD
| wordsofjade 10/2/11 . chapter 1
Very beautiful poem! wow I love the pictures i see when i read it. Gud job! :D
| Guest 10/1/11 . chapter 1
Love love love love so much so much love (for this).