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| RandomUser674 9/1/11 . chapter 1
I know what you mean. I suffer from insomnia, as well. Nice poem.
Check these lines:
And by it's end shall I lay (should be "its")
And, at least in America, "respite" is pronounced "ress-pit" not "ree-spyte." So it might not fit the rhyme scheme correctly if it's the same where you live.