Down and dirty, that's my vote.

This is a fabulous story! I'd like to get to know Mael, he's really interesting, and to be honest I can't wait to see them get down too :)

Loved it. If you do develop it further I'd be thrilled. Ideally want to know what opens to Brandon in the city and if Mael is trustworthy ).

Please write more! I love it so far! It seems ever so magical