Wow! Your writing so so freaking awesome!

Skylar Bane...

It has been some time since I have read a poem of high english caliber. Your usage or imagery to describe what feels like a hopeless situation is outstanding. I think everybody can relate to the emotion you are putting with regard that is frustration that is being felt with regards the situation. I also would like to express my deep felt gratitude for the review that you gave me. It is always so nice to have somebody read and review ones work. Especially a reader that actually knows what is going on. Good work. I'm thinking of trying to see about reading your Haiku's. I've not read any since high school.

Hi Anna,

Another solid poem. It's interesting but when I read this one, the voice of the poem comes across as detached and fatalistic even though the words are full of feeling. I think it fits well with the line "I'm emotionally fatigued from every...". Thumbs up.

This works so well for what it is. It feels a bit long-winded, but for the type of poem it is, it works perfectly. It's angry and to the point and the run-on sentences really work in that way. I'm not being very coherent and I have to apologize for that. :P I love the last two lines in the third stanza the best. They're so very true. Just gorgeous. Keep writing! :)

Another wonderful and meaningful poem. I loved it.

As always, a job well done! Man. I'm falling behind on writing. Actually I've been working on lyrics. Unfinished, but I haven't decided if I'll post them or not. Anyways. Great piece. Keep it Up!

So the first thing I did was to skim this through for words I didn't know (there were two, much to my embarrassment), because there are a hell of a lot of big words here. I laughed when I saw the word 'amorphous', because I'd just written a report on the properties of amorphous polymers, but that has nothing to do with your poem.

I love the way you've put the words together, and the way they feel, rolling of the tongue. I love this even more because it's the sort of thing that would usually scare me away, with its chunky stanzas and huge words, but it's not at all over-complicated by them and the message you've brought across is so beautiful. And the imagery? WOW - what else can be said about that?

Superb! Differently a sock to the stomach, makes you think in a new perspective. If I were him, I would take a stand back and look at the hurt I have inflicted on others; hope this wasn't based on a true story because it seems so sad :( but I have to say beautifully written - It's a gem. Please keep writing!

- Emi :)

Wow! What a sharp punch in the solar plexus, with just the right number of well-chosen words. This should snap him out of his preoccupation with himself and refocus his attention on more important matters. Well done.

Deep, thoughful...inner struggles are more evident when we attempt to pursue the desire for another. Excellent work!

Anna, this piece was absolutely breathtaking. It has been such a pleasure watching your poetry grow to this extent and mature into true individual brilliance.

I especially enjoyed the third and fifth stanzas placements of desperate statements of love and caring wrapped up in anger and emotions.

Spectacular mastering of the rhythm of a poem without rhyme.

the Stranger in the moonlight