|Reviews for Northern Oaks|
| hopelessromantic98 10/24/11 . chapter 3
There are lots of different characters in this story so sometimes it's hard to remember who is who but I do love the story! Drayden seems really creepy and I'm guessing he will show up a lot just because of the character he seemes to be. Overall it was a great chapter, update soon!
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 10/24/11 . chapter 3
Wow... if some guy who'd been drinking pulled a knife on me I'd probably have wet myself on the spot... Joke or not that was creepy...
Great chapter. I love this story so much. I can't wait for more. You are doing an excellent job with all of these characters. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| hopelessromantic98 9/17/11 . chapter 2
I love your story so far. Annika seems like a pretty cool girl and I really want to hear more about Noah and Mia. Please update soon!
| Kina is too lazy to log on 9/16/11 . chapter 2
This chapter is too short! DX
But I did like the introductions of Noah and Mia. :D Looks like Anni is developing a bit of a crush on Noah, and I recognize one of Mia and Kofi's exchanges from the RP but it was still cute. x3
And Annika will kick Kofi's ass next time. 8D
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 9/16/11 . chapter 2
Cool, love it. This story is great.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
| Brave Soul RMS 9/3/11 . chapter 1
Not-So-Anonymous Review time! First off, my only complaints is that it was too short and you could have fleshed out Kofi and Annika's conversation a bit. That's literally it. Everything else was great. You set up a good base to begin the story by introducing Kofi and Annika and setting up the transition from Annika's room to the neighborhood. Wording, grammar, etc was all perfect and I didn't know Kofi had dreads o.O
Either way, I expect greatness from you, Lolli :D
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 9/3/11 . chapter 1
I love it! From the first sentence I was drawn in and it just got better from there. You are truly a genius. If this was an actual book, I'd totally wait in line for hours to have you sign it. That is after I waited in line for hours to buy a copy.
I like Annika and Kofi they seem to have some great chemistry right off the bat and not just on the video game front. I don't know that much about Mia yet so I can't tell you weather I like her or not but I know that I like this story.
You have me hooked Lolli. No question about it. And what's even better about this is that since I haven't submitted an OC I can be completely objective on the whole thing and I love it! I think you have a future in the business of being an author you fun sized genius you.
Can't wait to read more,
| Mysteryless 9/3/11 . chapter 1
Yay! It's up! Good job, Lollikins!
I'll be expecting an update
| Swahili 9/3/11 . chapter 1
REALLY GOOD! Keep going! I can't wait for the next chapter! :) Annika sounds like a cool girl! I hope u update faaassst. i'll keep you in my favorites and alert. please update sooon! :D ooo, and read my story! I'll appreciate that too! :)