Hello This has turned out quite well, and I can't wait until you update with some more romance- and maybe horror? :)

...Whoa. I'm probably not gonna say much because I'm rendered mostly speechless with this chap. You made everything vivid, alright. So much to the point it's a bit traumatizing to picture, and I had to skim a few parts... Although, what I can also say is that your writing is still efficient overall. I wonder if this voice is good for Chi after this incident? The voice seems to help Chi at first, but I'm not so sure from this point on...in a way, I'm somewhat glad (and horrified with myself lol) that Chi ended up giving back her parents a taste of the own medicine to a certain degree. I'm not that all fond of reading graphical violence (mainly because its somewhat uncomfortable for me to read, I admit OTL), but the ending resolve at the last part of this chap gives Chi's life story a purpose for her detailed background. Now that her background introductory is over, I'm more curious of how Nicholai will save her from here on out. I'll be looking out for your new update, as per usual. :] Hope to hear from you again soon-! (P.S: Chi's video game...? o-o Okay, I totally lied when I said I wasn't going to say much for this chap lol)

Oh... my gosh. That's a LOT of bloodshed. O.O I am super shocked you wrote this... I... I'll review again later... o.o

Oh...lord. OH NO, what going to happen to Chi?! I have such a bad feeling that this was her turning point from being a happy child... And now that I know her background story, I feel so sorry for her-! TT I'm so scared to find out what's going to happen to her next, especially if it's graphic...P-Poor Chi-! OTL Seriously, I now find all the parents in this story pretty much messed up...what's up with that? XD

But anyways, other than my personal reaction, the literary part of this chap was great, as always. I really like how you depicted the difference between all the family members in the household, it's interesting to see all their distinct personalities if only just for little bit. I also like how you described Chi's relationship with her dog; it seems very realistic for a happy yet lonely child like her. Chi's initial personality was very clear as well, with your descriptions, she appears so vividly in my head.

I'm partially curious how she'll change at this point, but I'm also afraid...gah, you give me that frightened/curious emotion so much while reading your story now. XD I was suspecting her father to turn out like that, but I was somewhat doubting it until the end portion came up...I wonder if her mother is like that as well? And oh god, the siblings don't know anything either...so suspenseful! Haha as intimidated as I may be, I'll forward to the next chap, nonetheless. Hope to see you update again soon-! x]

Oh god. I think that's part of what changed Chi. She seemed so scary and then I learned that she was nice. But now I think it's her whole family's fault! For making those rules! For punishing her like this for just one thing! She's been lonely for so long! Her best friend just ran off... I feel so sorry for Chi...

PLEASE update soon so i know what happens next!

This is amazing! I love it so much! Great job!

MuaaaScary! Can't wait to see the rest! I wonder if Nicholai would be killed hehehehehehe...

Ohhhh this chap was great-! Lots of new suprising stuff going on, I like it. x] The part about Jordan being Ronald McDonald made me lol'd so hard. XD That was brilliant, LOL. I also like how every chap centers around with another character each time...it's interesting how you link it to the story plot, and how Ichigo and all the others have a fair chance on getting their individual spotlight every once in awhile. Although, now I'm pretty worried about what will happen to Nicholai...he won't die will he? (PLEASE NO OTL) I-I hope not. The part about Jordan helping Chi was shocking too, I wonder if he really has the intentions to kill Nicholai like what Grim says...? (JORDAN, WHY? XD) But ah, so many new raised questions-! Things are getting interesting but oh so suspenseful now. This chap is a good way for setting up the plot, and it kept me going overall, but I'm sort of eager and scared at the same time as of what's gonna happen next...XD" Utimately, I'll look forward to next chap, though-! I hope you'll update again soon! ;]

This chapter was wonderfully written, as always. I was shocked when Yoshi said they'd send in Nicholai to help out, but I think he might die at the very moment he succeeds, or that he will reach a critical condition while doing so.

I am happy that your story now has over 100 reviews, and I'm proud to have helped out with reviewing. In my opinion, your story deserves more than just 100 reviews, I think it deserves 1000. I know you will eventually reach it, though. :) I await the next chapter.

-Yumeiri Riku

This was a beautiful chapter as always- although I want more KentoxIchigo! XC

Also, when will Ichigo's powers come in? You haven't written much about the troubling powers of the 6 children.. (Or was it 7 children?) You are getting off-plot, and you're focusing a bit too much on the characters' normal lives and romance. Although I love the fluffiness of the story, I think it's best if the main topic of the story comes back. Isn't Ichigo supposed to be some sort of powerful mage or something?

I'm not sure if you just want to take it slow or if you've went off track...

I'm just wondering!

OMG. I LOVE YOU FOR THIS CHAP. XD Lol, seriously ok? The moment I found this story in my inbox, my first impression was "*Gasp* Omg, this story's updated again! *Cheering in the background*" And then when I really went to go check and read the whole chap afterwards, my mind was officially blown to heaven… LOL, end of story.

ANYWAY XD Asdfghjkl, I literally died from all the overflowing NicholaiXPurin here. x3 To be perfectly honest with you, I think I'm really going to like this pairing more than the actual main canon now, which tells something. XD Gahhh this whole chap was WAY too cute though! Not to mention that Purin was a total 'boss' here, LOL. She totally rocked in this chap...that one part about her shamelessly kicking the door was beautiful (Other than Ichigo getting hit in the process XD) And pfft, I love the boys here too, teasing Nicholai whatnot (LOL oh Jordan with his English xD). I think this chap might actually be added on to my personal favorites now, surprisingly. I didn't even bat an eyelash reading this whole chap lol, since I have to admit that I was too excited and giddy while reading this – it practically screamed, “PurinXNicholai ftw!” throughout the whole thing. XP Lol although not to mention, I can also totally see how Ichigo deals with her best friend now after reading this. XD Purin doing all these proud shameless acts, while Ichigo being the primary witness to all this...pfft, I see it so clearly there. XD

Now to put it short overall, this chap was awesome. Very light, heart-warming, and just so…‘Purin’, haha. XD It’s nice to be off from the suspenseful plot every once awhile - I would love to see what happens next, but waiting will most likely be end of me, lol. OTL The good side to it though is that the chaps are always worth it, so hopefully, you’ll be able to update again, soon…I’ll eagerly wait for next chap, until then! Fyi, my day was accomplished after reading this. x]

OMG asdfghjkl-it's really been awhile since you last updated this! I'm so glad you're back! Rest assured that I still follow this story, lol. ;D I still can't believe you updated again (Since it's been forever lol), but anyway, on to the reviewing!:

NOOO Kento's going! TT I mean, it's good for his future and to be away from his family and all, but for some reason, I have a bad feeling about this...? Lol, I don't know, I feel like you're plotting something, haha. XD Maybe something really bad is going to happen while he's gone...ack, so many possibilities! But lol anyway, I love Purin in this chap! She's so strong and unwavering, it's pretty admirable for her age. (Although, we all know she's lying about her not liking Nicholai lol. XD) Oh, and that one part of Nicholai getting jealous was all out adorable! Gah, why is he so cute? x] I hope Ichigo comes to develop feelings for Kento before it's too late...I feel bad for Kento, but in a way I agree with Purin that he can't always rely on her...ahhh too much conflicting feelings! OTL And it's sad to know that I'll have to wait to found out what's going to happen next once again... DX But lol that aside, overall, this was a nice chap as usual. :] It was great to see you update this story this again, and I hope school will get better for you. (I'm suffering in school too, haha OTL) Well, I'll wait for your next update for this story soon-! I'll be following this, no matter what. x]

Nooooo! I want the two to end up together... T-T Maybe Ichigo can go after him and at least confess... :'( Wahhh

It been awhile since you put up a chapter (like about 3 months maybe?) and your latest chapter was worth it! Can't wait for the next one Keroanne! Following the story, and favoriting you!

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