So glad you finally decided to update on this story. It's really good! No grammar errors or anything. Can't wait to get to know this Carson character. He seems...interesting.

So I am going to go into Grammar police mode cause i saw a couple mistakes in your chappie 4. In your first sentence it says "Lexi stayed in her seat whole everyone else...". Shouldn't whole be while? Then when you're talking about her punishment it says "Friday before school at 7:30 intil the bell." Shouldnt intil be until? Finally one question about the shadow thing. You talk about "The shadow thing was going." Going where? Or do you mean gone?

Dundundun... *dracula themed music playing in the backround*

The part about karma sounds like something that I say, but only I say, "karma baby, karma."

Hey good two chappies but I did see something that needs to be fixed. In chappie 3 when it's talking about the bus ride it said The bus ride to school was like every day. Shouldn't it be was like this every day?

Do you ever plan on continuing this story cause I thought the first chappie was really good?

Ooh, very gripping! More! Need more! :D :D :D

sounds REALLY interesting. Please continue!

this sounds like its going to be a really good story

GO RYLEE YOU ROCK!

i just love you so much! *sniffle*