I just started your story, and I must say, this is an awesome play! My only suggestion is when some of the characters talk, it's a bit unreal. But it also adds a interesting twist. I can't wait to continue!

I love this play so far! It's very well written, and the characters are amazing. Please continue!

i really like this play, it's well written and crystal is a very interesting character with a nice personality. looking forward til chapter 15.

I really like the storyline of your script and the content it good. Two little things:

1- In a script each part is usually called a scene not chapter.

2- watch spelling mistakes

I did enjoy your script keep writing! :)