| Reviews for Behind These Hazel Eyes |
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heal me forever 8/18/12 . chapter 5baby care to update plz..u stoped at a senstive point yaar :P so ya i would like u to cont |
TashiRd 10/7/11 . chapter 5I like it so far! keep writting! I want to know what happens next ;) |
squillink93 10/5/11 . chapter 5good story but always proof read :) i like the concept though :) |
GnomeNut 10/4/11 . chapter 5Yay, it's here! ;P I loved this chapter, especially all the Lena/Logan action going on. Keep up the good work! |
U MadeMyLifeComplete 10/4/11 . chapter 5I love this story so far and all the characters and romance cant wait for the next chapter :) |
CalitaSuperstar 9/14/11 . chapter 4Wow this story is really good! i cant wait for more chapters to come up! your an excellent writer! :) |
GnomeNut 9/14/11 . chapter 4YAY! A new chapter. ;P I really like it so far. The gradual growth of the side character's relationships and Lena's is really nice. Keep up the great work and update sooooonn! :D |
GnomeNut 9/7/11 . chapter 3Logan! He's super adorable and completely lovable. Update soon! ;P It's getting really good! |
GnomeNut 9/7/11 . chapter 2great chapter! It's super cute and I cant wait to see what happens next! ;) |
Hannah D 9/7/11 . chapter 3I love the story line :) this is great! update soon! |
blairwrites 9/7/11 . chapter 2Good start so far! The premise is a cliché but it seems cute nonetheless. My main critique is that you give lots of information about characters (like Lena, Jenna, Chelsey) in big paragraphs instead of weaving it into the story itself...that might make it flow better. And a little longer chapter is always nice, of course! |
DoctorDanielle 9/7/11 . chapter 1i think i love you cause your like the only person that knows the wanted just saying lol |
GnomeNut 9/7/11 . chapter 1Awesome beginning. . Can't wait to see where you take Lena and her relationships. |