oh pretty imagery. i like the contrasts.

yeah, it's late, okay, don't expect this to be a masterpiece.

This packs a punch! The rhythm's awesome and everything just seemed so natural. Awesome job :)

i love the imagery in this, especially how you describe the taste of the air, the feel of the water. gives the poem a chilling feel.

imagery imagery imagery. mmm-mmm-good imagery. i especially liked the contrast in feel, cold and hot and hot and cold. nice work - but stop posting poetry from school. :