One of the best stories I've read! so touching. I loved it, and there's probably no words to show how much I enjoyed this story

Thank God SOMEONE knows when to use the Jewish last name of Cohen. I read one story where the author had an African-American named Cohen.

Amazzzzzing story! Loved it!
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SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I wish I had a Gideon now... :(

Such a fantastic story! I was captivated by every second of it. Fantastic plot and even better writing. I stayed up way later than I needed to just to finish this story, but its totally worth it!

Well, a "double rainbow" is a phenomenon of optics that displays a spectrum of light due to the sun shining on droplets of moisture in the atmosphere. Does that explain it?

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This has made me laugh and cry and anything in between. This has been one of the most, if not THE most, emotional story on here that I have ever read. It was so sexually and romantically intense. I loved that the characters were flawed as well, in real ways.
And I just wanted to add that right after reading this, I got the song "I Can't Make You Love Me" in my head and every lyric really fit this story-just thought you ought to know. :)

This has to be one of my favorite stories on fictionpress. It's written beautifully, and the characters are wonderful (I love Bridget and Yair). It's even better now that I've read it a second time and I just wanted to thank you for writing such a excellent story, I have really enjoyed reading it. :D

I loved, loved this story! You did a awesome job!

SO. GOOD.
you blow right past all the other unrequited-childhood-love stories out there. all the emotions are so realistic, and i love how Nola is strong and independent but doesn't deny what she likes ;) also. the sex scenes. may i just say, UNF.

I've come back for a re-read, and quite enjoyed the whole story once again. : )

(I did read the epilogue again as well, but fictionpress doesn't allow more than one review per chapter)

Loved this story :) only complaint, it freaking took too long for them finally to get together! :) I loved the characters, was addicted to Gideon ha. I do think the story was a little too detailed, I did skip quite a lot of it to be honest. I loved the passionate sex scenes and the emotions from the characters. I liked how you wrote from both there POV I like when writers do that. Overall brill :)

what an amazing story. I love all your stories. You are a wonderful writer!

This is a great story!

I started reading this last night, and ended up staying up until 2am to finish reading. I even stopped reading the last couple of chapters for about an hour because I didn't want it to end lol.

Great job!

Absolutely lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I cried when she cried, I got giddy when she did... It was all perfect.