I will just say that it makes me think. I will also say that when it comes to personal fear and personal pain, I won't comment good or not because how can you say you do or don't like someone's pain.

I wil only tell you this; my wish for you is good and positive things now and in the future.

Excellent piece of work here. I especially loved the following lines.

I can't get hurt again; I have to resist

handing you the only gun that can put

a hole in my heart.

You would use it correctly, and completely

by accident. I may even wrap my hand around

yours to help you pull the trigger.

Seriously, well done!

I love the imagery in this so much.

I read it this morning, and was thinking for the most part of the day (okay, only when I remembered) about something clever and witty and insightful to say. I don't have anything, so you'll have to settle with an 'I lovelovelove this.', or maybe an 'I think this is awesome/brilliant/genius/wonderfully phrased.'. Oh well.

Vague beginning, powerful finish