I really enjoyed the unique formating o this story. Poetry used to tell a full blown love story? Awesome idea :)

Hey...

Uh... that was... brilliant.

breathtakingly brilliant.

i love it!

it feels so real and... safe in a way i can't describe.

thank you for writing it.

it is briliant.

it is magnificent.

yay. :)

Hi. I just wanted to say, I read your Daughters of None story and I decided to check this one out. And it was amazing.

The poetry part of it is really epic. It's telling a story through a poem, but also everything is really well put together and there is so much truth to the poetry.

I really like the name Antonia. All of your names are unique. I liked Niceala from Daughters of None(js!) and Antonia is so pretty. I can just imagine her. Like an angel or something.

The concept of this story must be lies. Because poor Dana has built up so many walls. Do you watch glee? Because I think that Dana and Antonia should sing Landslide. If you don't get it just Wikipedia the "Sexy" episode.

From what I get Antonia is feeling the same way.