BRILLIANT! Really, I love this so much. All the characters were so different and really detailed, like I knew exactly where I was, (although I sometimes got a bit confused by the changes in perspective, but it was mostly fine). Also this was really funny, especially Collin teasing his sister, anyone teasing Alex, Adam teasing Greg! Hilarious :) I can't believe they never did blowjobs any more since what that douchey guy did to Matt! That sucks! (well... )
Anyway.. SUPERB story! You're a really awesome writer :D

Really Epic is the only word I can think of. Sad it's over soon. I love the whole cast of characters

Ah, and here is where the stories intersect. Very cool.

And SQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! SQUEE. Perfect :)

I like how it's just casually slipped in that Greg is bi-curious, lol.

I think that this was very well written.

Adorable yay! I love these guys so much. :)

It was rather good for fictionpress until this hackneyed rape sequence that

a) came out of nowhere
b) was not treated with the amount of gravity it deserved
c) happened far too quickly

Now that bit is done with, I can enjoy the story again.

Aww! That's cute! I like the idea of them adopting a child. I think it's funny that they amed their child after Alex. I think it's adorable that Collin acts like the guy and Matt acts like the girl. I think it's cute and sweet that Collin gets over-protective.

You skipped right to the wedding. :( I liked the wedding though, but you still didn't go into detail.

I don't like this chapter! It's like one giant summary and no detail. If you needed to make the story longer for the detail, then you should have.

Hey! New comment thingy! I think they added this while I was reading your story yesterday, but never had anything to comment about.

Poor Matt. :( He's so cute and sweet! Why'd it have to happen to him?

I like how you included parents in the story. Most stories are "He doesn't care what his parents think" or "He hides it from his parents" or "He doesn't live with his parents". You get the point. In most stories, the parents are left out. I feel like this is more realistic with the parents in there, because it's like, "Where are the parents?" Even if the kid doesn't care what the parents think, they're still part of his life and it still effects him.

My best friend ever, I consider her a sister, was kicked out for being gay. She had nowhere to go because she lost all of her friends. She had two weeks left of school and had to hitchhike and lived with a girl that was charged with child abuse. I was about to kill her mother for kicking her out, but my mom said, "She still loves her mother." I got so pissed. I was like, "Why? How the fuck can she love her mother when her mother obviously doesn't give a fuck about her?"

Of course I hadn't found out that she was kicked out until a few months later. When I did, I said, "I don't care if it's three in the fucking morning and I have the most important test ever as soon as I get up the next day. I would have come to get you." I think I got my point across. I don't get how a parent can do that to their kid. I'm just glad my friend lives with her aunt and grandmother now, both still love her. What happened to loving your kid unconditionally?

Okay, back off of my rant. I think you made the situation more realistic than most stories I've read do. I really like your story. The only complaint I can think of, is the time skips confuse me. And the obsession with the eyes kind of freak my out.

What's with him freak out over Matt's blue eyes? I think that they're all oblivious.

The story was great. Neither Matt nor Collin were perfect and both of them made mistakes just as it happens in real life.

What I find refreshing about the story is the fact that neither of them could be described as the woman in the relationship in spite of what Collin says. After all, it was Collin who wore eyeliner.

I loved the way you changed the POV ("The Freaking Conundrum's Perspective" or "That Idiot Freshman's Perspective") and think it was really original.

Aw, it was so fluffy. I liked the story very much. It's how I wished a lot of things would go.

This story was absolutely wonderful, I loved it! Thank you so much!