I absolutely love this. There's just so much emotion; so many emotions I can relate to. I... I just can't seem to find the right words to describe how beautiful this is. Black

Thanks for the review by the way

amazing powerfull moving. reminds me of my last relationship the bloody battle it was. really good description. could feel the channeled anger.

miku

Very nice! I really felt the raw emotion and it gave me chills! Even though it was short, it had a big impact. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely H,

PS: I'm glad you liked my poem! :)

I LOVED this. :O It was so... OMG. Oh btw, you're very strong to go through a rough relationship. I hope for the best for you. :)