|Reviews for Captain Olafson GC X|
| Guest 1/7/13 . chapter 19
Great story, details are fantastic, and puts one in the action.
| anon 12/28/12 . chapter 19
loving your story.. no complex constructive criticism (its 4:30 in the morning)
just a simple acknowledgment of my enjoyment.. thank you
| Joe wilson 12/22/12 . chapter 19
I can't get enough.
| yotsman 9/29/12 . chapter 19
Great story; I particularly enjoy the character development. It's a great pity that there are so many typos and grammar problems. It seems that the author is from a non-English speaking background. Two chronic examples are:
1. The use of "barley" when you mean "barely".
2. The use of the word pad and padding when you mean pat and patting.
| a99515 12/25/11 . chapter 19
what an wonderful ending ot another great book
| NeWBeE 12/18/11 . chapter 18
Planetary revolutions... Hah, they don't do anything small. Got to love the stuff this crew gets into. Very good development of the story. It's time to wake up the First Engineer! I'm wondering if that chip is something for later or the key to wake him up.
| a99515 12/17/11 . chapter 18
what a fight the two cleaned up the bar way to go VR
| a99515 12/13/11 . chapter 17
Too the meat and bones of the story! what a wonderful chapter that has added to this book.
| NeWBeE 12/12/11 . chapter 16
Good Chapter. Brings a little more awesome adventure into your already "oh so adventurous" space opera! It was a pleasure to read the interactions and further developments on possibly helping the Ithe. The Dark One showing up a bit was the icing for my cake. I look forward to the next update!
PS: Don't forget to have the tank picked up Captain. lol
| a99515 12/12/11 . chapter 16
well worth wateing for you out did your self VR.
| NeWBeE 12/10/11 . chapter 15
Very good! I've been waiting so long.. It was like the lake had run dry and the tributaries had been dammed for so long. Now the floodgates have been opened and my thirst quenched for some VR entertainment! It was worth the wait and quite a good read I must say. I enjoyed the super crab and your description of the new aliens. Sound funny looking to me. I'm happy to have read a nice update and look forward to the next one! To adventure, new discoveries, and kicking much a$$! lol.
| a99515 12/6/11 . chapter 15
This is a different chapter than the last one that was up. both of them are great chapters that need to be included in this book as now there are two good reasons to fix this mess up world.
| hikuk 12/6/11 . chapter 15
A new chapter at last. I had liked the one you deleted but this one is good too and while I'm at it I want to say that even if I don't comment much I still read your work and I like it very much so I hope that you will continue to write.
| Tim 11/27/11 . chapter 14
Vanessa where are you! please tell me you are still writing this awesome story? I've been missing your updates! what is happening next!
| Excellent work 11/15/11 . chapter 14
Reading you story has been a blast. Thank you for your imagination that fills my days.
I can't wait to see what happens when they find all those artifacts!
When are the next chapters coming? It's been a long time between drinks (as we say here is Australia - cricket reference)