Quite dark but good still. I hope you continue to write you are amazing at it

This was amazing, I've always been interested by Greek mythology and the god Pan. This is a wonderful take on him that I've never seen before and I loved it. Thank you for writing such a good story!

Oh, the ending is beautiful. Pan is one of my favorites and while I usually see him as being happy with his position, I like how you portray him being uncomfortable with himself. This was very good. (: