I really enjoyed this. There was no surprising twist but it was satisfactory; however, I wish I could have actually seen their feelings change instead of getting one sentence explaining it. Their relationship was interesting enough that I would have loved to read more.

Wow, shit that was really good! I really liked Taylor and Atri, even though their lives kind of suck. Hope you keep writing more stories, yours are really easy to get caught up in

Really enjoyed this, which is rare, since I don't normally like sci-fi so much! But Atri was really endearing, and Talor had such a brutal, strong personality, that it was hard not to like them together.