I like this. I like how it could be about phrasing anything. It could be about writing or about a conversation or writing a letter. Anything. It makes it realteable and it made me think. I also like the vagueness with all those emotions. It's like you're forcing the reader think of their own emotions which again makes the piece relateable. Well done.

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I love this. A wonderful haiku.

so simplistic yet so beautifully written. great job.