This is absolutely stunning, I love the diction in this, I love everything about the poem, I love the imagery, everything, you are truly talented.

i adore the imagery in this.. evocative and vivid.. write on!

This is haunting. Some great images. My only criticism is the phrasing of the last stanza, though I can see why you phrased it how you did. I'd just prefer to see "she picks her teeth" as the first part of the stanza. But I love "more papercut than pulse" and "cemetery season." Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)