|Reviews for september and sinking|
| classic violet 11/25/11 . chapter 1
This is absolutely stunning, I love the diction in this, I love everything about the poem, I love the imagery, everything, you are truly talented.
| thursdays and rain 9/24/11 . chapter 1
i adore the imagery in this.. evocative and vivid.. write on!
| no.peace.los.angeles 9/17/11 . chapter 1
This is haunting. Some great images. My only criticism is the phrasing of the last stanza, though I can see why you phrased it how you did. I'd just prefer to see "she picks her teeth" as the first part of the stanza. But I love "more papercut than pulse" and "cemetery season." Gorgeous. Keep writing! :)