|Reviews for orion|
| SettleThePetals 10/20/11 . chapter 1
I simply adore this. Especially "& black holes like/ great white sharks &/ your gravity swallows me/ whole," The break before "whole" just feels perfect to me. And I love how you have a simile and personification in the same thought.
Had me enthralled.
| anachronistic 9/14/11 . chapter 1
this is interesting
makes me think of cosmic love
"your pockets all full of / stars, plucked straight out of the sky & tossed / into my eyes"