I simply adore this. Especially "& black holes like/ great white sharks &/ your gravity swallows me/ whole," The break before "whole" just feels perfect to me. And I love how you have a simile and personification in the same thought.

Had me enthralled.

this is interesting

makes me think of cosmic love

"your pockets all full of / stars, plucked straight out of the sky & tossed / into my eyes"

perfect.