| Reviews for Jump and Fall |
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Mcgde 11/28/12 . chapter 24Oooh threesome. Yum. I can't believe you haven't updated this in a year. Well...unless you're dead. Then I'd believe it. Update! -Mumbles- My milkshakes bring all the boys to the yard. Damn right they're betta than yours damn right they're betta than yours. And then he ate that cock! Too graphic? Sorry. Boom pa shoom ba boom ba doom. In the arms of the angles... Angels. I meant angels. Angles are pointy. They would hurt if I was in their arms. Gotta get that. Gotta get that. -Snickers- I drink your milkshake! Cuuuuuzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz My milkshakes bring all the boys to the yard. Damn right they're betta than yours. I wonder if zombiez like milkshakes. Probably taste better than brains. Picks taste like rainbow unicorn poop. I'll love you forever if you update. |
Mcgde 11/28/12 . chapter 22Aww noooooooo D: My poor baby boy Ashy-kins! Nooooooooo! On a happier note, I love this story. :) My favorite part was when Tyson found Ashton doing the dirty below him... snicker Totally a Tyson fan here. Go on my fellow smut writer! Woo your boy! Hi ho and all that jazz. I salute you, my dear madam. Not a story so far has kindled my interests like this one. Now I must be off. Tiddle-doo my fair maiden. -Native |
Nia Moone 11/5/12 . chapter 11"Beef Chow Fun" hehe, is this actually on a real menu? That's such bad Chinese. Made me lol. Otherwise, I liked the chapter, it was cute :) |
TheMaidenMoon 10/17/12 . chapter 24Holy SHUT! That was AWZOME! Threesome for the win! |
Chevix 9/5/12 . chapter 24I absolutely hate you right now. You do not leave it at the absolutely most perfect moment like that! A freaking three-some and you walk away! God I am dying right now. I cant believe I stayed up till three in the morning to read this with classes in five hours and I'm left at that bad of a cliff hanger! Please tell me this isn't forever abandoned. You would crush me if that was so! |
wallawallabingbang 8/26/12 . chapter 24oh d*mn it i just noticed this hasnt been updated in a while is it discontinued ? |
Deaf-Suicide 6/29/12 . chapter 24Devastated. That is what I am. I am begging for you to come back and finish this! I almost died when I realized there was not another chapter. |
JamyWard 6/16/12 . chapter 24Oh my Jesus I swear il be the one comitting Suicide if you don't update soon. I love this story so much I could die and not feel it :3 |
JamyWard 6/16/12 . chapter 24Oh my Jesus I swear il be the one comitting Suicide if you don't update soon. I love this story so much I could die and not feel it :3 |
blackkitties 6/15/12 . chapter 24noooooo! more i need more. You cant just stop after they have a threesome thats not right! thats like the ultimate cliff hanger! |
sunny-california 2/4/12 . chapter 24...I have no words to describe the sheer awesomeness of this chapter (still in shock o) a threesome? HELL YEAH! |
Twitch1995 1/19/12 . chapter 24I absolutely love this story! I read it all at the same time! I was shocked when both Tyson and Rory were goin' at him AT THE SAME TIME! *swoons* I so didn't see that coming though! I'm just glad he got both of his boys though. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
H.s.s.Hunter 1/18/12 . chapter 24Please tell me that isn't the last chapter..? I love it though! |
Person 3 12/22/11 . chapter 24 This is awesome! Please tell me it's not over! |
Fumiki 12/22/11 . chapter 23aaaaanyway I noticed in the earlier chapter that you were wondering if there's any guy reading this. I'm a guy... and yes I'm gay, or else I won't be reading this :P Just thought I'd let you know. lol |