I like this story, yet fifteen seems a little young, especially to be speaking the way she is... But keep uploading! :)

How could sam! does he like her, Grr i would be soooo mad

I would slap Duncan and stopm on Sam's foot. then I would run away and sneak into the camp in the begining. Being with friends again would calm me down.

Ok, so I liked the general Idea of the story, and the way you made her have to stay home for the summer, but..

You use way to many exclamation marks and also "he/she stated" for telling how someone said something. You could change it to "He/she replied, answered, told me." stuff like that

Also, you're story seems to go by super super fast and I can tell a romance is going to bloom with Sam and her, but you should make that happen while the she an the 17 year old are going out. Ad more details to make it longer too. And, you need to add commas to some sentences.

Other than that, I liked the story, and I think you have great potential! XD

I'm so keen for more! :D this can be hard, but write faster? IT'S SOOO GOOODD :P I hope Duncan doesn't freak out when he finds out her age... :S

Lisa

i really like this story! you're doing a great job! :D can't wait to read more!

I'm not as straight foward. But I would probably would lie too

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Eeek I love it Im so glad you posted more. It felt like i was acually post more. Sorry it took me so long to review my computer has been broken. And i love her name. Its so unique. In my story her name is average. Its chlo

I love it will you write more?