Sorry I would normally try to review each chapter but DARN IT-I got TOO ENRAPTURED BY THIS STORY-I LOVED IT -REALLY REALLY LOVED IT! The ANGST, EMOTIONAL, PHYSICAL TURMOI was SPLENDIDLY DONE HERE Jacob-I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE 2ND PART OF THIS STORY-that was DEFINITELY an ATTENTION GRABBER ALSO!

whoa ... wonder what's happening to her ... everything's so mysterious, in a good way. i hope it'll be cleared up soon :)

- d.

this was ... interesting. a bit confusing and weird (why'd he bite her ear? why would anyone do that? haha)

there were some typos here and there, but they were small ones. proof reading would really help.

i loved the ending! it was funny ... weird bus driver though

:)

- d.

wow. this was a really cool intro. pretty mysterious and stuff :)

so ... who's the devil? the guy or the girl? guess i'll have to read to find out :)

- d.

brendan or drew ?

i read your first chapter just a year ago and all i thought it was AMAZING! i even read it before you had no reviews on this book but i did not review because i didnt had an account at that time.

please reply i am such a fan of Loved by the Devil :)

I am really happy that you might upload the first chapter. I am really excited but I would understand if you don't. Once again, I can't stop smiling because of you thanking me. It really wasn't a huge deal, but still. Welcome for convincing you to do this and thank you for making my day!

Cassidy

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GRR the end? -sniffle- TTwTT

I love it! I think it's really cool that you're gonna try and get it published because you're definitely gonna be able to. You'll be the next J. K. Rowling! I hope you know, that when you get it published, I will definitely buy it and make all my friends buy it too. I am sorta sad that you're not gonna have the next story up for a year, but I'm ok with it. As long as I still get to read your writing, I'll be ok. Welcome for pushing you to revise and try to get your story published. Thanks for giving me a shout out. That's never happened to me so now I can't stop smiling. Well, I can't wait for next month because I'll get to read more!

Cassidy

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I LOVE THE CITY OF BONES BOOK! I LOVE THAT SERIES!. Anyways... You would be an awesome author! Keep writting, you story is amazing, its one of those stories that i can actually picture in my head. I love it and i cant wait for the next part of it!

Wow, so its done? Cool. :-) Well, I hope to see more stuff from you soon.

AMAZING! I loved this story! I can't wait for the next story in the series. You are such and AWESOME writer. I bet that if you really tried, this could get published. That would be SO cool. Well, I hope there is a new story soon. And YAY, you're done from your break.

WOW, so I finally got around to reading this. Glad I did, you have a lot of interesting stuff in this (I can never turn down a supernatural story!) and I am interested in reading more next time you update.

Honestly I don't like to read stories that jump between characters in the first person. I find them a pain to read and also a pain to write. Thankfully I enjoy your fluid writing style and do notice some distiction in voices between the different characters so in this case it works.

Overall, awesome job! I'll be adding you to my alerts and everything so I will not miss another update. PJ

Grrr cliffhanger

lol...good chapter...I wonder why Drew bit her on the ear for? That's really strange to do since you just might the girl...haha!