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absinthe21 9/16/11 . chapter 1Oh. Nice. :D Definitely experienced that. Maybe add a bit more about his good qualities when they aren't fighting. Plus a bit more of those anger issue things. I dunno, just me. It would give her dilemma a bit more weight, I guess. Increase the pain of letting go, a little bit. But this actually already works. You can skip the stuff above. The writing is pretty much solid, actually. Kudos. :D |
the way you look at me 9/16/11 . chapter 1This is way too familiar - what a beautiful write. |