i love the wordplay in this, really. & the use of formatting just makes it even better. it reads as if the entire poem were being whispered in my ear by the coldest winter wind.

if that makes any sense.

(to put it simply, this is really quite chill. keep it up.)

*spelled my own pn wrong, lol.

wow, i'm in complete awe right now. this was just so, so pretty- well, well done. definitely keep the writing up; you have an amazing way with words. :)

catherine

love the lines "and your eyes are whispering icysoft/daggers to me - uglycreepygirl, look, look" SO AWESOME! fantastic imagery :)