| Reviews for Towels and Sheets |
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Boo 3/25/13 . chapter 1 Oh this is soo good. Not too dramatic, humorous enough - it's great |
ClosetReader 1/2/13 . chapter 1It's cute but still it's strange that the whole school has seen her naked. |
Dill Wilson 9/13/12 . chapter 1What A Way to Get a Date! |
Julietish 6/2/12 . chapter 1Sorry it's taken so long for me to review this! I had the review written & saved- I just completely forgot that I hadn't submitted it. Well, here it is: You know how when you start reading a story, your opinion of it slowly forms? When I first started reading "Towels and Sheets", I could tell it was going to be a good one. Well-paced from the first sentence, the narrator's personality became clearer and clearer. She's obsessive-compulsive and pays attention to every detail. And the dialogue- it's very captivating. The way the narrator's physical features were worked in subtly through the words of others was flawless. This is one of the best ways I've seen a description of a main character- too often, we're bombarded with a dead-pan description of every single feature by having them look in the mirror. Lovely "Romeo and Juliet" references! Also, Nick Saunders sounds absolutely attractive- that "panty-melter." The kiss at the end is beyond wonderful. This is really well-written, Anita. |
Ngoc1231 11/12/11 . chapter 1This was a really cute story! And I can't believe that she, once again, left the blinds open. It's making me self-conscious. Loved the story! *Ngoc1231* |
balloonfista 11/3/11 . chapter 1hahahahahaha, I loved her revenge! :P Ri |
What.Tha.What 11/1/11 . chapter 1And again, lOl you write the most EPIC stories... |
flyingpencil 10/30/11 . chapter 1Lol, this was very funny. I really enjoyed it, very realistic and overall I totally didn't expect the twist at the end. Dan is a terribly evil friend, but he probably it would be the only way these two idiots would ever overcome the gap between their worlds and try talking to each other. Hahaha, I like evil friends that you have to forgive in the end because you know they only wanted to do you good. (The kind of friend that'll happily push you into the water when you claim you're aquaphobe... just to make you realize you love swimming ) Just one thing: the fact that Nick just came over to her room stark naked is probably not very rational, a normal person would've simply borrowed someone else's boxer's but I'll just put that on the account that it's saturday morning and he must be recovering from serious hangover! Very good one-shot, one of the best really, I can't even find anything wrong with it... Perfect! :D |
reindrops 10/29/11 . chapter 1I liked it. Haha, short but cute. |
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC 10/29/11 . chapter 1ahahaha LOL as soon as I saw the word thongs and loo, I was sold (being a fellow Aussie and all :P) Cute story although I have to say, she is a bit more calm than our regular OCD sufferer and I would have though she would have been a bit more ticked off about the photos (more like hysterical). Overall, well written and a very fun read ) |
Preposterous 10/29/11 . chapter 1Such a cute oneshot! I love it! |
jammi 10/29/11 . chapter 1This was super cute, I really enjoyed it although I do think it's weird you gave her OCD, a disease that makes people double, triple check something they've known they've done once and she's forgetting things that some people would do over fifty times just to be sure they got it. Other then that, I really did enjoy it. |
DontWaitUpForMe 10/10/11 . chapter 1wow. great idea. I was laughing at the end. |
flunkybubbleshorts 9/19/11 . chapter 1Hahahahah! That was funny! :D |
StarryNight359 9/17/11 . chapter 1haha such a good story line lol |