is jay really gone or are you just taking him away for a little bit cause i loved his character and if she ends up with a rebound I'll be really sad. love your work i think it's a great story. hope jay is in future chapters!

Why did my theories have to be right :(! Not happy missy! lol... but i have another theory... he is trying to save her from Pluto? He doesn't want Pluto to know about her so that she doesn't get ruined herself?

eh eh eh? lol

xx

Sometimes, just sometimes, someone we love will let us believe a lie because anger is better to fight off depression and hurt. It makes us bitter but we live.

I think Jay cares for Evie, a lot. But maybe he doesn't want to say 'I love you' since he's going to leave and he wants her to be happy and all that mumbo-jumbo. But I must say that I knew something like this was going to happen. I mean, his pops is Pluto, for Athena's sake!

...OH! I just remembered Evie's parents... DANG! A big I TOLD YOU SO is on it's way, isn't it?

Wow.

I did not expect that in the slightest.

I was so caught up in the relationship that I didn't notice the bank details at all.

Poor Evie.

I am no very eager to see what happens next.

Garneau.

I cried sooo much! The inevitable that was it.

I love IT! Update soon

Everytime i see an update from you my brain literally goes, "YEAYYYY"

seriously...

I pity her. That's like, the most awkward dinner ever. D:

She's lying to herself. Her family's opinion matters.

He is so adorable! :D

And then you make it all sad with the whole, 'Two days and I love you and you're leaving' thing.

Pluto sucks.

Aww. She'd wait. How tragically adorable.

SHE SAID I LOVE YOU! And he didn't say it back! D:

Lulz. She called him "Blake James".

Oooh. The bedroom. Aww.

Updateupdateupdate! I DID!

Hi. I just read this. At school. With you standing approximately five feet behind me. Which is weird. Anyways, I'm reviewing to say that I will more thoroughly review later. But I did notice that he didn't say it back. NOT COOL, MAN! Also, nice soap opera commercial. XD

UPDATE NOW!

Find out next week! You want to have me beg don't you? Evil!

Please, pertty phuleeeease? Better?

XOXO

again LOVED it, amazing "awwww" moment :) can't wait for the next chapter.

Jay, you're hot and all, but could you please say those three words already? You're a pain in the ass to Evie, you know that? :))

Anyways, I was thinking of Pluto and thought of his face being scary, but how could I blame him for having Jay? Jay's handsome so maybe Pluto may be handsome, along with Carmen's beauty. :)) I don't know. I like Jay, and still irritated with that idiot. He is an idiot. If he loves her, he should tell her. Still an idiot. :P

HOW COULD HE NOT SAY IT BACK!

Does he really have to go that would make me so sad, but then again maybe he is just seeing her as a fling! He didn't say it back.

OMG LOVE3 and i have theory. Before she cut him off I think Jay was going to say that her saying, "I love you," was enough to let him stay. Like Pluto and he made a deal or something and Jay had to get someone to say, "I love you." And that's how he's going to fulfill what her families been warning her about, when they said he was going to hurt her.

That's just my thinking, could be totally out there but can't wait for next week!

I just had a thought! (rare for me :P). I was starting to think if any possibility for sexiness to stay and (this is probably gonna sound really dumb lol) I thought a bunch of "what ifs"? And one was what if Plutos condition is one I those twisted fairytale things where someone has to love them and it breaks the curse thing and... Well nevermind lol. Just a random thought process. ANYWAY! I loved Vee and the picnic and I'm super glad she tol home she loved him even though he didn't say it back. Is he like some robot demon/angel from hell that's incapable of loving? Okay kidding. Sorry. Great chapter and it was awesome to see an update ;D. Sorry for... Yeah. I'm on cough syrup. Can't wait for more!