Hey, nice job :D

You seemed concerned that some of the chapters were short, but that's okay. You did a great job conveying the emotions that Katie (or Mark) was feeling, and setting the scene.

Katie did have a rough year - and losing Clover was heartbreaking. She came out stronger in the end, though.

Well done. I'll keep an eye out for future work :)

that was a really sad ending. but great story.

I still hate mark.

LOVED that ending it was so simple and sweet :) and it wasnt one of my ideass either which made it better... Keep Writing Nicole x

so sad can't wait for an update

i really want them togethere :( x but i cant wait for the next update maybe somehting will happen x

Aww i know exactly what it feels like when you text with emotions lol and that was it, cant wait for the rest :D x

ooooo i'm excited. now some people might have been sad at this okay to be honest I was a little.

Your doing it to me on purpose arent you... becuase i left my story on a cliff hanger you did the same lol please update soon i want to know more x

it may be short but i cant wait to know waht happens next... please update soon x thanks x

great story update soon.

Hmm, is Katie getting out of her depression? She seems to be doing normal activities etc.

Mark confuses me. Does he think abt anyone else than Katie? He seems overly concerned by her and let's it eat him up too much. It's weird bc he doesn't like her? I don't mean to make this a negative point but I don't know how normal this is in a guy. Also I hope Katie changes her tumblr password. She is really going to scare Mark.

So I like the story and that's why I'm reading it but Katie is handling things all wrong and slightly immaturely( but she is a teen so I guess that's ok). I guess that's just a byproduct of her depression etc but it's making the story seem like a depressed girl that wants a guy she loves to give her a the guy is just not interested. if that's the direction, i hope there is some resolution and hope Katie can get out of the misery.

Mark is a gentleman but maybe too nice which is confusing. I am wondering if he does like her deep inside( though doesn't know it), but perhaps i should give it up lol. Its just he thinks abt her soo much.