Wtf?

You are quite the author.

This was a very short and disturbing story indeed. I'm prolly not in my right mind for saying this, but... I liked it. I don't know why but I did. Crazy stuff mister. (*_*)

At first I thought, "What the hell am I reading, this can't possibly pick up in time for it to end."

Then those last two paragraphs. Wow.

All I can do is wonder what you were thinking when you wrote this.