|Reviews for Shadows Of The Night|
| Sayure 8/28/12 . chapter 2
This a good story the only problem is that it's a little strange that just after you finish reading an action for -let say- person A and move to the next one, you reread the same action but from the view of the person B.
Ex: He bit onto Chaos's arm, and using the momentum he forced Chaos to pull out of Tsuko.
The next action: Havic shifted back to his human form and stood protectively in front of Tsuko.
The first action: Tsuko screamed in pain again as chaos was forced to pull out.
You can say: he bit onto Chaos's arm... well he was forced to pull out, Tsuko screamed in pain then Havic...
I'm not that good in English and I wish I didn't insult you or whatever-different cultures- it's only what I think, other than that I like the story.
| Alerk 8/5/12 . chapter 1
| morningstorm70 8/2/12 . chapter 29
Oh please tell me there will be more
| Alex Dark 3/1/12 . chapter 1
Nice start to the story. I am kind of curious where this is going to go.
| gallowsCalibrator 12/19/11 . chapter 12
I really like the story so far! Update soon!
| Sapphire2619 12/5/11 . chapter 1
Honestly I was really looking forward to reading your story, but it is so disjointed that I cannot followed and that makes it so hard to read, I couldn't even get past the first chapter, all I can do is wish you luck- let me know if you ever do a rewrite
| Johnny-Bruno 11/21/11 . chapter 6
I enjoyed this but WTF! Whats with sex while the little girl is there!
| Johnny-Bruno 11/13/11 . chapter 5
Okay. I liked this chapter.
| Johnny-Bruno 10/20/11 . chapter 3
I am enjoying this story a lot but I was wondering. Why is Kizu the bad guy? Isn't she your bleach oc?
| Johnny-Bruno 10/12/11 . chapter 2
I love the story but the rape was evil! Hot but evil!
| Johnny-Bruno 10/11/11 . chapter 1
I am amazed at how good this is! I love the plot and how descriptive you are with everything
| Pinkshuchan 10/4/11 . chapter 2
The story is really great so far. There were lots of grammar mistakes but that's natural. I wish though that you could've maybe took some time to describe the scenery of the setting where everything is taking place and describe the characters a little more but overall great job. Can't wait to read more.
| G.G. Devons 9/22/11 . chapter 1
I like the imagery you give, particularly in the fights and just in general situations. Other than spelling, grammar, or punctuation, I'd say you're doing a fine job. I'll be looking forward to reading what else you may write!