I like this chapter. I thought Rika would have reacted MUCH differently to Hecate saying: "Join me as I show you wonders you've only dreamt of". On another note, I think you should stop writing about the Champions. At least in this story. You've pretty much ended it by breaking up the Champions. The rest right now is just filler and prologues to what could be potential spinoffs. You currently have one story right now, and that's the Champions. If you want to keep writing, why not just make a new story just for Rika's new life in Greece? Or maybe about the other characters? It's just a thought.

Delta327

dang, wow, what an ending!

WHOA! WHAT!

really loved the past two chapters, really digging this new character also keep it up!

This was a great story that could of been easily spun off into different story lines. I would definitely like to see a spin off with Raven and her group or (this is just an idea) Hidalgo doing some sort of detective work. This was a great story from top to bottom and has actually inspired me to write my own superhero like story.

Hope to see some more great writing!

Delta327

Could Hildago's powers work with a random or stray bullet shot?

That's it! SAM'S DEAD! PROTO'S DEAD (EVENTHOUGH HE WAS A TRAITOR!)! GRANITE'S MAIMED! *Sob" My life is overwith.

You know, that he's mentioned it, Will doesn't really do much. I mean sure, he does date Julienne, but we never get to how his powers work, nor do we see how often his powers could be useful towards the other mebers. For instance, Savant wouldn't have to 'borrow' money from companies, (or too much money) if she just made a wooden model and had Will turn it to metal. Furthermore, I was have enjoyed to hear about his Christmas.

So saaaaaaaaad! Now I wanna have a funeral so tha I can hearnwhat peopke have to say about me.

NOOOOOOOO! M-Martin's dead!? It can't be! I was about to comment on the whole Irresistible Force vs Immovable Object thing but now I'm too depressed. Thanks a lot Tiamatty!

Very nice chapter. Phoenix is a bit of a dick and she doesn't seem to be having much luck when it comes to love. I hope her situation improves.

Eddie x Alvin.

That being said, your overall knowledge of the world impresses me. And all 123 chapters of this story has proven you to be ruler of the geeks. Please don't ever stop this awesomeness.

My only issue with the story is knowing who is who

Oh God the, the name of the next chapter is jihad? This can't be good. Anyway sorry about not commenting lately, I've been caught up with a lot of school work. I actually really like the last couple of these little one shots. I still say Champions Forever though.

Interesting chapter.