|Reviews for Another Chance|
| Claire S 9/20/11 . chapter 1
I wonder if you would enjoy writing a non-rhyming poem- Not that I don't like the rhyming ones! It's amazing that they can rhyme and still be comprehensible (I can't do that at all)! I just think you might like writing non-rhyming poems too (if you already have, sorry, I'm too busy to check out all 15 of yours right now, I will later).
The first two lines, 'You broke my heart one too many times, our relationship is as sour as lemons and limes'- that is some great poetry! It makes sense, rhymes, and is totally awesome!